Some good camerawork here and certainly an improvement on your initial framing exercise. There are some really nice close shots here, especially the final shot which is really well framed / composed. You have examples of sound work as well, partic the phone call. You fulfill the editing criteria and have examples of all 3 techniques required. A good Match on action through the door and you observe the 180 degree rule during the conversation. The shot reverse shot is the one area that you could improve - it is well edited, it is simply that the framing/composition is a little loose - consider the amount of empty irrelevant setting around the characters - the subjects need to fill the frame more here, such as in the final shot where we see Tegan's facial expression up close.
Some good camerawork here and certainly an improvement on your initial framing exercise. There are some really nice close shots here, especially the final shot which is really well framed / composed. You have examples of sound work as well, partic the phone call. You fulfill the editing criteria and have examples of all 3 techniques required. A good Match on action through the door and you observe the 180 degree rule during the conversation. The shot reverse shot is the one area that you could improve - it is well edited, it is simply that the framing/composition is a little loose - consider the amount of empty irrelevant setting around the characters - the subjects need to fill the frame more here, such as in the final shot where we see Tegan's facial expression up close.
ReplyDeleteGood - Low 4.