Thursday, 12 January 2012

Our finished video for our Preliminary task

1 comment:

  1. Some good camerawork here and certainly an improvement on your initial framing exercise. There are some really nice close shots here, especially the final shot which is really well framed / composed. You have examples of sound work as well, partic the phone call. You fulfill the editing criteria and have examples of all 3 techniques required. A good Match on action through the door and you observe the 180 degree rule during the conversation. The shot reverse shot is the one area that you could improve - it is well edited, it is simply that the framing/composition is a little loose - consider the amount of empty irrelevant setting around the characters - the subjects need to fill the frame more here, such as in the final shot where we see Tegan's facial expression up close.

    Good - Low 4.

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